You can’t understand a poet till you learn what’s in their heart
You can’t brighten your day till you walk among the dark
Till you mend it back together and tear it all apart
Tend to a broken heart
Be too clever for an idiots smarts
Be too sweet for a sour tart
Everything gets broken
Before you know it ice is on fire
Ice is smokin
Nothing is understandable
Nothing makes sense
How can you relax when it starts to get tense?
Too much money spent
But this is priceless
I live for this
But I’d die for this
I laugh for this
I cry for this
How can you relax when it starts to get tense?
I love the emotions in this and your use of the perfect words.
thank you!
You captured me with your first line, and I was grateful to enjoy every one that followed, thanks!
thank you very much(:
I liked the first 3 lines, meaningful 🙂
thank you(:
true words…
well penned..
Happy Rally.
🙂
coming straight from the heart, I enjoyed
It did, all my poems do. From the soul and the heart, thank you! (:
I had to read it twice, lovely depiction
awh, thank you! (:
Looks like a good one for spoken word. You should recite, record and post it
hmmm, i don’t know. Thank you(:
Its so true….lovely written.
Great work.
I could relate to this one very much, nicely penned.
Thanks for sharing this. It was well written and a sense of balance I found myself feeling as each line worked together, flowing toward the end.
thank you so much! that means alot to me(:
You can’t brighten your day till you walk among the dark
so so true!
I know right! thank you(:
So true! Fantastic job
thankyouthankyouthankyou! (: means alot!