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When It Starts To Get Tense May 22, 2011

Filed under: Poetry — poetrybee @ 7:56 pm

You can’t understand a poet till you learn what’s in their heart

You can’t brighten your day till you walk among the dark

Till you mend it back together and tear it all apart

Tend to a broken heart

Be too clever for an idiots smarts

Be too sweet for a sour tart

Everything gets broken

Before you know it ice is on fire

Ice is smokin

Nothing is understandable

Nothing makes sense

How can you relax when it starts to get tense?

Too much money spent

But this is priceless

I live for this

But I’d die for this

I laugh for this

I cry for this

How can you relax when it starts to get tense?

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21 Responses to “When It Starts To Get Tense”

  1. TeriC Says:

    I love the emotions in this and your use of the perfect words.

  2. You captured me with your first line, and I was grateful to enjoy every one that followed, thanks!

  3. Madhumathi Says:

    I liked the first 3 lines, meaningful 🙂

  4. Jingle Says:

    true words…
    well penned..

    Happy Rally.
    🙂

  5. Looks like a good one for spoken word. You should recite, record and post it

  6. meiro Says:

    Its so true….lovely written.
    Great work.

  7. Dheepikaa Says:

    I could relate to this one very much, nicely penned.

  8. Fred Says:

    Thanks for sharing this. It was well written and a sense of balance I found myself feeling as each line worked together, flowing toward the end.

  9. swanrose Says:

    You can’t brighten your day till you walk among the dark

    so so true!

  10. So true! Fantastic job


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